Write an in-depth reflection on the input you got from pitching your hero's journey 2nd film project. What was some of the constructive feedback that you got? What were some issues with your story and pitch? What are your next steps in the process with it?

What are the major challenges that are preventing you from getting greenlit? How can you solve them?

The main issue with our pitch is that we didn't disclose the entire idea at first, which left a lot of confusion at the end when we were getting feedback. We also didn't decide production roles, give clear examples of our concept, or create a well-thought-out hero's journey story. To fix this, we decided on our production roles and made sure that we were all committed to them. We also made sure to clearly communicate that the hero's journey would be half-interview, half-narrative. We also went back and added more details in the story to fulfill the hero journey requirements, such as creating a stronger mentor, herald, and reconfiguring the character archetypes to fit the characters more clearly. To make sure that this project runs smoothly, we need to make sure that everyone fulfills their roles, especially those who are responsible for editing and creating the drawings/characters, as the project relies heavily on post-production work.